Best Friends preview

Best Friends is the book I'm writing. I have the first draft done, but I'm still working on it. I'm making a huge change to it, but i forgot my notebook in my locker... so I can't type that on the comp and write more to that part. Anyways, read and comment!

Chapter 1

“You have two minutes! If you’re not out by then, mark my words, you are going to be very unhappy!” I, Sapphire Hendrickson, yelled through the bathroom door.
“Hey, wanna see, my frog? I named him Herbi!” asked one of my brothers, Izzy. Age? 10. Hobbies? Picking on helpless creatures, such as mice and frogs. And annoying his sisters. And his brothers. And his parents. Basicaly everyone in sight.
“NO! I’m running very late! Unfortunatly, my lovely twin won’t come out!” Yeah, my twin. Her name’s Krystal. We’re both fourteen. Ever thought having a twin would be fun? Or even a sister? Just look at this scene. Not as fun as it’s cracked up to be. Most of the time, at least.
“I would have been out by now if someone hadn’t squirted me with a super soaker when I walked out and ruined my hair and make-up!” Krystal screamed from the bathroom.
“I thought you were Liz!” shouted Izzy. Liz is another sibling. Age ten. Izzy’s main victim.
“Shouldn’t you be at school by now?” I asked Izzy. His hair was an uncombed blonde mess, and he was still in his monster truck pajamas.
“No, Mom’s taking me to the dentist today.” He replied.
“I swear, Izzy, when I come out of the bathroom, you’re going to need more than a dentist!” Krystal screamed. My ears were beginning to ring. Izzy’s eyebrows grew wide, and he ran into his room to hide. I heard the lock click.
“How much longer is this going to take?!” I pounded on the door.
“I have my makeup on, but it might take some time to do my hair,” she said through the door.
“School starts in 10 minutes, and I haven’t brushed my hair yet!” I took a couple deep breathes, trying to calm myself down. “Okay! Who cares, I am leaving!”
I stomped out of the house. After I grabbed some breath mints.