Bold= The mistake part
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Pg. 389
fortunately, we could all see pretty well in the dark. especially Iggy.
problem with this: Iggy is blind, so he could not see especially well in the dark. James Patterson must have meant EXCEPT Iggy.
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Pg. 369
Fang was] unconscious but still breathing.
Problem with this: There was a left bracket ( ] ) where it shouldn't be. I looked and didn't see a right bracket.
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Pg. 364
Well, I would, I thought bitterly, If I wasn't so busy running for my life all the time.
Problem with this: She was thinking it, so it was italicized. Parts of it wasn't italicized because she was emphasizing it, but the "I thought bitterly" part was italicized, and it shouldn't have been, 'cause she wasn't thinking of it.
The Errors I've Found In Maximum Ride: The Angel Experiment
10/23/06
Posted by Courtney @ 8:42 PM
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Have U seen the errors I found? I can't remember.
I've got more.(I know this book backwards and forwards.)
7th page into the entrees from Fang's blog, 4th paragraph down, 2nd sentence, it says 'wet, dripping Fangs' it should be fangs.
yeah, i remember the one bout how they had Gazzy's name somthing, then in School's out-- forever, they said it was somthing else. and they said Iggy's dad was dead, but then they met him. i think that was done on purpose, though, i think. how many times have you read the books? i've read each one three times!
Really, well, (4 those of U good at math) multiply that by about seven. Yeah, I do a LOT of reading :)
Maybe Iggy can "use the force" to sense the things around him.:)
lol! "No Iggy, I'm not your father."
Stupid lines I used in a recent game where you had to talk to a rubber chicken and try to make someone in the circle laugh.
"So chicken, tell us, why did U really cross the road?"
"..."
"TALK CHICKEN!"
"..."
"so... not talkin' eh?"
"Well, we have ways of making U talk..."
*Tortures chicken with BBQ sauce.*
(This next thing is from Star Wars,though I changed it just a bit [just so U no.])
"So, where are your rubber friends now?"
"..."
At this point, someone giggles.
"It lives!!!!"
*Throws rubber chicken at the giggler for the big finish*
LOL! sounds soo fun!!!
well, first, there is nothing wrong with Maximum Ride. second, there is nothing wrong with Maximum Ride!
Thank You Very Much!
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